Friday, 30 September 2016

dawn, a fine rain

dawn, a fine rain

dawn a fine
rain across
the valley
in streetlights
fixed as if
on seams of
coal in a
miner's dream
everything
brought
to the surface
in rain
the valley
crackling with
birdsong
jasmine flowers
shining in the
ample wet
on scoria.
                  

                  1 october 2012

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  2. Seams of coal in
    a miners dream & jasmine flowers
    shining in the
    ample wet
    on scoria caught my eye, and my breath! Great imagery!

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